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Instructions:
Draw 10" x 15" on 11" x 17"
art paper , preferably a two-ply smooth bristol board, in pencil only. Think about, in general, where word balloons
might go, but do not draw in any balloon shapes. Pencil
tightly and completely. Do your best work. If you are skilled
at lettering or design, then it’s acceptable to draw in your
own sound effects.
Keep track of how many hours you spend on
each page, and write that information on the back.
Make a
full-sized photocopy of the artwork for yourself.
If
submitting samples by mail, send the clean photocopies instead
of the originals, with the time-it-took info on the back, your
name and address and phone on each page, and a stamped,
self-addressed envelope for a reply.
SUPERMAN
-- Sample Plot Sequence
PAGE
ONE
* Half-page establishing shot inside the Daily Planet
offices. This is the end of a day's workshift; some
people in the background are coming and going. It's
Jimmy Olsen's birthday! A HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JIMMY!
streamer is up. Add some decorated helium birthday
balloons, an already-cut birthday cake, and a few presents.
Jimmy is hamming it up, with a silly birthday hat on.
He's ripping open the wrapping on a square present. A
cute redhead girl is helping him rip it, laughing. Clark
is nonchalant, leaning on a desk, enjoying a big piece of
birthday cake. Lois is nearby, whispering in Clark's ear.
Perry White has set aside his cigar, with cake and a steaming
coffee, instead, as he gestures widely, spilling a little
coffee as his says something wise and funny. Give the
feeling of family, of friendship among colleagues and lovers,
very alive and real.
* Two-shot close-up on Jimmy,
laughing, caught up in the fun as the cute redhead kisses him
on the cheek. "There's no card -- is the present
from you?" "No, but THIS is!"
* As Jimmy yanks the lid off
the box -- letting go of the box as he is startled! -- three
softball-sized spheres with wild electronics and little
nozzles on them fly out of the box, zipping around the room.
"Yeow!" says Jimmy. Clark is setting his piece
of cake aside, concerned. The others are reacting --
surprised, ducking out of the way, etc.
* ZZZZRRRAP! One of
the spheres fires a blast at Jimmy, searing his clothes
and wounding him! Others start to get out of the way,
run from the office, etc. The other spheres are also
firing blasts, shattering a desk, blowing out a group of
windows, and so on. Big damage!
PAGE TWO
* Clark is hunkered over Jimmy, checking whether he's
alive -- while positioning his body trying to shield Lois from
the spheres, which continue to dark around.
* One of the spheres fires at
Perry White -- and Clark leaps, his body taking the brunt of
the blast, searing his suit where it hits.
* Clark lifts his glasses,
firing his super-vision at a sphere, and BLAM! it's destroyed.
(Yes, all in one panel.)
* One sphere fires TWO blasts
-- seemingly killing Lois and Perry!
* On Clark, very afraid for his
wife and friends as he grabs the sphere, scrunching it with
his bare hands.
* The last sphere suddenly
EXPLODES, with dramatic lighting effect, blasting off Clark's
suit, revealing him in full costume, shattering his glasses.
PAGE THREE
* On Superman, falling to his knees next to Lois, with
the seemingly dead Jimmy and Perry nearby. Tears in his
eyes, full of anguish. He's touching Lois, his head is
cocked to one side, he's clearly seeking a sign of life in
her. He doesn't notice the smoke residue from the last
sphere is forming into a 3-D image of a face....
* It's the face of...the evil
Braniac! "Systematic elimination of your family,
friends, and support system is only the beginning of my
revenge, Superman!"
* On Superman, holding
back his emotional pain...
* ...pulling himself together,
full of anger...
* BIG PANEL! -- Exterior of
Daily Planet. This can be day or night, whichever will
give you a more dramatic scene. -- Powerful shot of Superman,
with his friends carefully bundled in his cape, flying out
toward us, to a hospital, full of determination.
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